Tuesday, March 26, 2019

The Raven And The Coyote Comments

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The Raven and the Coyote

The Raven watched the moon. Her interest awoken by the sitting Coyote on the mountain ridge. The Coyote was the trickster, he should be dancing and creating havoc. He sat watching the raising moon since early dust. The piercing eyes of the Raven watched the subdued Coyote with great interest. The Raven went to the Coyote, sitting near him and she asked him. If you loved her. Why did you set her free? You restraints in the want of love when you should have been begging for her to stay. She seized your heart and you wished her well in her new journey away from you.
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Bonaventure Onuabuchi 15 April 2019

What a narrative piece, with depiction of lovely memory

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Castellenas John 28 May 2019

Thank you Bonaventure. I appreciate the comment.

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Jennifer Birchall 02 April 2019

What a beautiful written poem, he loved her enough to set her free.

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Castellenas John 28 May 2019

Thank you Jennifer. Can't imprison love.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 March 2019

A highly imaginative poem. So beautifully written and with superb imagery.

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Castellenas John 28 May 2019

Thank you Rose. I appreciate the comment.

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Bryony Sheldon 26 March 2019

Adding this one to mypoemlist

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Castellenas John 29 March 2019

Thank you Bryony.

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