Monday, October 16, 2017

The Rapture Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time…slowly passing, achieving nothing, wilting into mists of complacency.
Eyes ever seeking greater expectations, but seeing nothing.
Hearts closed..unaware of the coming tribulation..
Like the flood to engulf and saturate every living thing.
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Shaun Cronick 14 July 2020

Brilliantly imagined and so beautifully written and presented. A most fine and powerful poem ending on that virtue called Hope. The Hope of redemption and atonement for those who have sinned in life.10++ and thank you for writing and sharing your most thought-provoking and food for thought poem Lodigiana. Take care and I wish you well. Shaun.x.

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