The Rape Of The Moon Comments
They landed with a soft thud
They scratched
They pinched
They bit
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This one is superb di...u have given a voice to the moon who is been mined and cashed for long by poets and now man has encroached its pure state of being..
Very well written Jyoti! Last year I had written a few poems about the moon, - 'The Moon Llke a Loaf of Bread' & The Crescent Moon', -hope you like them? -Raj Nandy
What a wonderful poem, Jyoti, a bit outdated though, but still has a great deal of universality in it. It is true that complete nudity and total reality eventually become unattractive......10/10. Best Wishes Naseer
This is a wonderful write... a nice flow... Good use of words for a magical effect
Beautiful Jyoti. But this should have come when Armstrong stepped on Moon. Very soon our Indians too find the ugly secret of Moon......well don.
It seems this morning I am finding treasures of poems that are different and full of imagination. Usually I find emotion the ruler of most poems. Well done great imagination
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9/7/2025 10:05:04 AM # 1.0.0
wonderful poem.i liked it.keep it up.