Thursday, November 26, 2015

The Rape Of The Buds Comments

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Crimson petals strewn
on a carpet soft and green,
bleed in tears, silent.
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Neera Lollbeeharry
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Dev Anand 26 July 2018

The buds are defiled their full nudity exposed to bold groping hands. Heartless nature smiles enjoying the ruination of frail innocence..life, its experiences, love, expectation and cruel reality. what is love? what is? is there a romantic without cruelty.? Dev

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 December 2015

Heartless nature smiles enjoying the ruination of frail innocence. you have images in your brain that is so powerful to bring in themes which affect the reader. thank you. this is a great poem in simple words.. thank you. tony

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Neera Lollbeeharry 13 December 2015

well thank you, sir, for all the encouragement.

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