The Rainy Day Comments

Very good. It takes the dark, dismal side of love, and puts it in a physical place like a rainy day. Parts like 'sitting on the porch drinking iced tea' puts a clear image in my head of the life the people in the poem had together.

what christopher said (he always says what i'd wanna say) .....well written! !

The refreshing rain of remembrance is always rewarding. Thanks for sharing

Written very well. Might suggest to set it out like a poem so it's easier to read. But still good work! Keep it up! ! :)

I like how everything ties together. Very cool. And I really like how the whole poem feels really dark and dismal. It sounded very sad though.