Tuesday, June 14, 2016

The Rainwater Barrel Comments

Rating: 5.0

‘If only she hadn't turned, ' he said,
‘The bread and the bacon burned,
It wouldn't have made me jump, ' he said,
‘Knock over the butter churn.
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David Lewis Paget
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Kim Barney 14 June 2016

Outstanding. A wonderful poem. A ten from me.

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David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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