Monday, June 27, 2016

The Rains Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unending rains, dense clouds are thick
Enough to fertile human heart that is sick
Abundance of water to wash the dirt
Yes, now I see the earth's green shirt,
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 October 2018

A beautiful poem on the Rains, Akhtar Sahab inspired by a Bengali poem. The thoughts and words that have emerged by the rains, is simply marvellous. Enjoyed reading this rain poem......10

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 July 2016

I am young once again! To respect nature with the joy of your heart. Nice piece of work.

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 June 2016

I am a human being it's revival of age, Come on get out of the time's cruel cage. Time cannot cage the spirits of the soul... Rains has the power to heal the entire Universe... What a beautiful poem Babajaan... Every word is shining like the drops of rain. Just awesome and fresh.10

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Khalida Bano Ali 27 June 2016

A beautiful poem describing sentiments of older persons during the rains.

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Hans Vr 27 June 2016

Refreshing rains, feeding and cleaning. Let the cursers of the rain go on cursing. Wise poets know better. I really enjoyed to read this very well written poem.

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