Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Centro Poblacion, Culasi,5708 Antique, Philippines
Monday, September 24, 2012

The Raining Man Comments

Rating: 4.8

The rain when drop
Cold wind snap
The feeling of cold
Like alone in the world
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Fredoneth Jonelas
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Kelvin Owusu 28 September 2012

a great way of expressing emotion, each line compliments the other an excellent piece

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D H 28 September 2012

You are comparing the rain to your emotions, I like that, keep it up the work and effort. If you want to see how I compared rain to myself and the situations. Please read Rain, and Rain 2.

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Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Centro Poblacion, Culasi,5708 Antique, Philippines
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