The waterfall baptised us
And cleansed our sin away
The waters were cool to bathe our bodies
In the blessed bliss
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Ever so beautifully painted! .. Swept away in love, guided by the heavens above! .. Awesome! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++
A rendezvous under the stars, with one's beloved. So romantic! Thanks for sharing.
So beautifully crafted poem adorned with the wonders of nature, great imagery and imagination. Top Marks! ! ! !
Opening lines speak volumes about your imagination and creativity. Fabulous poem.
The magic of rainforest explored deep and expressed in full sensuality. Top score and MyFavourites
Rain forest, waterfall and nature contribute to love in its beautiful environment. Super Poem LeeAnn.......10