Friday, April 4, 2014

The Rainbow Glance Comments

Rating: 4.5

My vision pierces through the glasses,
To the beats lively with rain
And hiding sun from behind; witness-
To my indelible accounts- unabashed by walls.
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Deb Panda
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Hazel Durham 04 April 2014

Vivid, visual details of the magic of the rainbow showing off it's extreme beauty! Lovely write!

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Patricia Grantham 04 April 2014

Very nice description of the rainbow and its beauty. Captured vividly n your poem. Nice lines.

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