Thursday, May 21, 2015

The Rainbow Comments

Rating: 4.5

'THE RAINBOW'
In the grey sky,
In the cloudy sky,
There is a hope of brightness,
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Aishaf Rehman
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 07 January 2016

Verily, cloudy, the dull environment and the rainbow, bright shows your spirited existence among the dull environment

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Aisha Rehman 26 May 2015

Thank you Akhtar Jawed. I liked your analysis Good luck you too.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 May 2015

The poem is a spectrum of a society where various colors have forgotten the lesson of coexistence, but a rainbow of hope still appears on the sky with all the VIBGYOR colors together.....................10

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Aisha Rehman 22 May 2015

Thank you Ayman Parry! My pleasure.😊

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Ayman Parray 21 May 2015

Reminds of a favourite artist who passed away some years ago. Thanks for sharing Aisha, very good poem. Thanks a lot

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Aisha Rehman 21 May 2015

Thank you and it's my great pleasure. Mr. M James and Geoffrey fafard

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Aisha Rehman 21 May 2015

Thank you and it's my great pleasure.Geoffrey Fafard

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Mr. M Jamal 21 May 2015

Brief and an enlightening way to show hope :) Well written Aisha! :)

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Geoffrey Fafard 21 May 2015

No colour mentioned.All colours present.Short sharp and hope delivering.Good poem.Thanks for the lift.

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Aisha Rehman 21 May 2015

Thank you! Simon :) All the best

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Full of hope and positivity. Well done my friend!

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