Leaning over the earth
from the windows of my heart,
I looked at the sky,
the sky mysterious and vast,
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Great metaphor! Fine work Sir...effusing a spectrum of emotions and thoughts
Ah! yes, very good. We see the point and yet you must read mine: When Love Died. Love died and yet the bittersweet lived on... Adeline
Speachless..Stupendo fantabulous fantastic write.... Love is worth risking any pain. It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all. Correlated love with your poem..the rainbow...Amazing...You are GR8..Wish I could write something as meaningful as this...
I love very much rainbows and I actively look for them after every storm. I think the next time I see one, I will definitely thing about this poem, connecting the skies to love. So wonderful. No storms lasts and often storms result in this wonderful rainbow also in our relationshiip. Great. Fantastic. Keep it up, Amrith, I like the wisdom, I like the style.
Captivated, and drawn in by your poem! The expression and imagery inter-connected beautifully! The thread of the rainbow was weaved through the entire write. Well penned my friend; D They say there is a rainbow that surrounds the thronr room of God!
I like how you wove your ideas of love & life with that of a rainbow. Beautifully written. I give it a 10. I too have a poem called 'The Rainbow's End' if you care to read & comment on it. Thanks. Spiritsong