The Rain Wont Stop Comments

i would like to change my mind. im sorry for what ive done.

A beautiful epic poem. The lines dropp so naturally and are presented nicely through a simple, yet interesting rhyme. Good write. Thank you for sharing. ~Besa

...drenching the already drowning soul...... confusing. Drowning soul! Soul itself an abstract entity....when it is drowning, another abstract is necessary to hold the content. So many abstracts can not be imagined by the human conscious at a time for brooding. Otherwise well written.

i like the image of the last line: some prisoners waiting