The Rain Will Wash Me Clean Comments

a poem.ethical in its senses..seems to be pessimistic but optimistic in full. hopes in every word..rain is adorned with serenity.. nicely described the elements of a rainy season.. 10++++

Deeply poetic indeed, this poem has a beautifal reflection.

Wonderful narration. nicely worded. deep poetic thought.

This poem works wonders. It deserves a 10++

I like the idea of the elements being furious at the injustice inflicted upon an innocent soul and soon this will turn into some sacred wrath and thunder to be culminated by the pouring of aerial rain that will wash away this ordeal of injustice. The rain pours down upon me Mixing with tears of desperation The temepst comes upon me Holding me safe in the midst of it's fury The lightening eradicates my undeserved trespasses The thunder voices my righteous vindication It allows the rain to cleanse me Of the albatross' I carry My tears are still assimilated with the rain I feel my encumberance being lifted from my soul As the rain and my tears wash me clean Then some calm will reign: My heart and soul begin to feel elightened As the maelstrom's intensity gradually fades away I wordlessly thank my beloved elements My gratitude is acknowledged with a beatiful 'rainbow' Delicate and small it surrounds me Filling my minds eye with sweet serenity Leaving me with it's everlasting promise That when it is most ardently needed The rain will wash me will wash this ordeal. Excellent work with a high mark and my wishes for a lasting peace of mind.

this is my favourite of your poems that i've read, one day the rain will wash us clean!

wonderful double simile: ''I feel my encumberance being lifted from my soul As the rain and my tears wash me clean My heart and soul begin to feel elightened As the maelstrom's intensity gradually fades away'' wonderful symbolistic poem, very well written, thank you for sharing................10++++

stunning piece of poetry! ! ! ! i can learn from such poems! ! ! ! it's really wonderful....i gave it 10..