Saturday, June 14, 2014

The Rain, The Moon And The Night Comments

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The Rain, The Moon and The Night

If rain can refresh the grass
quench the thirst of the forest
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adheez van der beanthz
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Walterrean Salley 10 September 2014

Your poem holds depth. It's amazing what rain can do. Good analogy, as is the overall message.

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Hazel Durham 25 June 2014

Rain can saturate our senses, with the reality that life is not all sunshine, we should release our tears and our fears, cleanse our souls! Beautiful write!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 June 2014

A fantastic poem on the merits of rain. And im a moonlover. Great to read u again.

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Savita Tyagi 14 June 2014

Beautiful.Love the concept.... Let your tears gush to refresh the solitude to satisfy the grief.... Lovely lines twisting the poem so well.

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