Wednesday, September 12, 2018

The Rain Takes All Her Joy Comments

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To derive joy out of the silver
Drops
She would laugh and dance around
The silver lake
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Ramotlhaba Chrisjan
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Dr Antony Theodore 05 October 2018

She fell in love with the Lightning, the rainbow Colour of the nation. i wish i could grow wings. beautiful. imagination, desire, wishes, vry fine poem dear poet. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2018

It is really a beautiful poem on rain, love and nature having touching expression and nice collocation. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 September 2018

she never cared if someone Is listening She sings for herself I wish I could grow wings Like she wanted to hover.... what a great attitude, not caring about what others would think of you. this is an inner freedom........ thank u dear poet. tony

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