Saturday, August 9, 2008

The Rain Slapping At Her Windshield Comments

Rating: 5.0

Leaving her home in fear,
She had promised to give it a year,
Watching the rain slapping at her windshield.
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Victoria Dame
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James B. Earley 14 August 2008

A vivid portrait of life........you paint! Indeed 'Like the rain....slapping at the windshield.' An excellent composition.

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