Thursday, August 29, 2013

The Rain Knocks On My Window Comments

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The rain knocks on my window,
In the middle of an abysmal sleep.
Dreams shattered and broken,
I wake up again and not the first.
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Raabia Tabassum
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 21 March 2015

Absolutely vivid instinctive reflection of a mindset, portrayed beautifully. Excellent poem any one can make his/her own. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 21 March 2015

A lovely look into a moment. Thank you

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Chinedu Dike 21 March 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and written with conviction. I like the way you captured your mixed feelings about the rain. It's a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Rajnish Manga 21 March 2015

The poem unfolds various moods of a man depending upon the intensity of rain. Thanks for this lovely beautiful poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 August 2014

Nature changes according to the mood of the man.(Shakespeare) . You may be in a mood to enjoy the rains sometimes. An honest and beautiful description.

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Ramesh Rai 22 June 2014

Beautiful write. Keep writing.

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Angelina Jele 18 September 2013

Your title lured me into reading this piece. I really liked your title and the way you described this poem. I was voting for poems and I think this is one of the best I came upon until now. Keep Going!

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Raabia Tabassum 18 September 2013

@PhilipCarter Thanks! :)

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Philip Carter 17 September 2013

Like it, in my case the rain helps me to sleep.

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Raabia Tabassum 17 September 2013

thnkx! ! ! ! ! ! u so much

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Heather Wilkins 02 September 2013

a good write as the rain knocks on my window.

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Raabia Tabassum 01 September 2013

Thanks. :) :) :) :) :)

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Saadat Tahir 01 September 2013

liked these lines.... Rain beads continue, One after the other. And my nerves back forth creep, nice

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