The rain knocks on my window,
In the middle of an abysmal sleep.
Dreams shattered and broken,
I wake up again and not the first.
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Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and written with conviction. I like the way you captured your mixed feelings about the rain. It's a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
The poem unfolds various moods of a man depending upon the intensity of rain. Thanks for this lovely beautiful poem.
Nature changes according to the mood of the man.(Shakespeare) . You may be in a mood to enjoy the rains sometimes. An honest and beautiful description.
Your title lured me into reading this piece. I really liked your title and the way you described this poem. I was voting for poems and I think this is one of the best I came upon until now. Keep Going!
liked these lines.... Rain beads continue, One after the other. And my nerves back forth creep, nice
Absolutely vivid instinctive reflection of a mindset, portrayed beautifully. Excellent poem any one can make his/her own. Thanks for sharing.