The Rain At Night Comments

rain has its own magic

An amazing description particularly the following lines: - The sun’s garish been burning so long To feel the coolness I stretch my palm And feel the rain’s touch on the lips Healing showers rendering bliss in sips.............................10

A lovely visual poem, love it :)

The diction tells its story how the poem is composed... One could easily get the impression that U were much excited while composing but one thing that I noticed (may be I'm wrong) is that U had difficulty while choosing the words... The natural flow of thought is disturbed by the rhyming words... But, overall, a nice piece of poetry!

I could see how deep you went in this beautiful writing. It seems to bring something hiding inside out. Tender, deep but true Well done.i love it. Mohabeer Beeharry

rain at night has some extra pleasures bcoz at night we hv nothing to do except sleeping so it is enjoyed fully. a well versed with some outstanding imagination

Who can say you were not the part of the rain and the night with all its imagery? Nice write and same read.

A free flowing, greatly rhythmic write, sweet sounding like the pitter- patter of rain! !

Wow... i did enjoyed! very very nice.i loved Ur poem...oh...i feel i like to sing it, i mean i like to put music on it...thank u! i feel calm after reading it.it seems that U've chosen the words so carefully!

wonderful imagery of rain at night......fabulous job

Last night also i had a beautiful sound with rain fall melodies hitting the roof and windows...so calming...this thing always be my favorite! soo calming...and you tell it so well as what i feel_Soul

a good poem with nice imagery.

Beautiful poem.. Flow is very good... Loved reading it..

the words, imagery and the flow very good yeah, this is beautiful poem

The format and the diction go well hand in hand and the theme blooms out to be a fine Jasmine poem.

This is beautiful poetry Jasmine.The flow, rhyme and concept is awesome.Loved it.