The Rain Comments

I love the theme of this poem... you could say it flows like water.

A melodious, diaphanous poem like a fine warm rain. 10.

what a lovely poem, so musical, like a gentle rain, I can almost hear your mother singing...!

This poem, as mentioned before by Rory, sounds like a song/lyric. Although that fact, it's another brilliant work of art. The flow is pleasant.: D Thanks, Jake

it seems that i read this by someone else. it is a great write

Your poem reads rather like a song, it's very melodious and attractive indeed.

You are handling the natural subjects like fire, rain etc. in a wonderful manner. Thanks for inviting me to your page

Beautiful poem, Bhaswat. It reminded me my village and childhood memories and I became a bit nostalgic. Thanks for sharing this lyrical write..........10/10. Regards Naseer

lovely rain bring relief to every one beautiful theme.....10

Yes, I grew up in Calcutta hearing that poem you mentioned in para one! -Raj Nandy

nice descriptive write...well penned...10

Rain speaks to tuneful souls in all parts of the world. This is a beautiful poem. I can feel the warmth you have for your mother. Take care. Kind regards, Sandra

beautiful description of rain i love rain to walk in it 10

Hi, like most of people, i love rain very much. Every dropp lead us to another silent step in our favourite journey. Just like the one u wonderfully describe. Tks for sharing

rain inspires most of us, doesn't it?

All the four verse are good. liked the first and last. Good one.

an excellent write! and the truth within makes me grin.

'Water of rain' - this is a double usage which you may trim. Rain is water only. The poem is nice. I also like rains very much. 'Work like the life blood of the seedlings just sown' - Just sown - you should re-think. Rain gives life to many seeds sown over a time. A seed may sprout only after a long time under a favourable condition. We can see it from a figurative angle also.

All in India are waiting for the monsons noww...for the rains to wash away the heat and dust off our faces..! Thanks for the rains, Bhaswat. Cheers. Subroto

Loved the echoing sense of drip drip drip..........just like in my poem where i used the word.........Lovely!