Tuesday, September 2, 2008

The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The ants carrying their eggs for safety
On the background of dark silky cloud
The herons fly to their destiny
The cattle returning with panic stricken crying
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Tapas Baidya
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Kesav Easwaran 11 September 2008

The rushing in of the rain with the howling sound of wind behind, is well compared to the whistling fast approaching train...the use of phrase 'trespassing in a poetic climate' is apt...indicating a poem rushing in singing- as the train, as the rain....good write, Tapas...10

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