Wednesday, June 4, 2008

The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wake up to the sound of rain
thinking of you with a heart full of pain
knowing your gone without a thought
wondering why I am left with an empty heart
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Whisper Dawn
COMMENTS
Adeline Foster 07 May 2016

Very well donea. Read mine - Rain Adeline

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Stary Night 04 June 2008

wow its GREAT i loved it i can relate to it

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Natalie Sapphire 04 June 2008

Wow i really enjoyed your poem... very deep. If you had a chance maybe view my poems as well? Thanks, Sapphire

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Whisper Dawn

Whisper Dawn

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