Friday, April 11, 2008

The Rain Comments

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'its raining! its raining'my mother cried inside.
i in excitement became glad and went outside.

i stood near the gate and smelled at a gaze,
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Vidi Writes 21 May 2008

Oh! ! ! What an imagination! ! ! ! 'Clouds came hovering like kangaroos in the sky' My dear poet... i love this line in the poem. I am dreaming and imagining Kangaroos... melting and becoming a shower on earth. ooops.... You gave me today's grass to eat. Thank you.

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K. V. Venkataramana 12 April 2008

A beautiful and evocative poem on rain. Thanks for sharing.

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Will P. Litter 11 April 2008

That was sweet feeling. Thanks for sharing

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