Saturday, January 30, 2010

The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Waiting a rain to stop is highly ridiculous
Because flash of thoughts overflows
Thoughts of the morbid past
That I used to savage the nature of vast
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Sheldon Allen Saluta
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Auty Paul Jason 18 June 2010

I fell like you were in my thought It sure can give the pain when the rain is stop falling Nice poem

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Monica Sevilla 04 June 2010

ohh allen...i have a poem title fearless love..but i asnt able to publish it yet..ill share the few lines.. rain symbolizes fearless love to be like a rain is what i aim coz rain dont knw where it wud land but it just falls.. some kind a like that i forgot hehehe

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 May 2010

Rain wets everyone. Move on, without falling into the trap of rainbows.Lovely expression.

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rainy seasons are almost here in the Philippines! nice poem... if i am a professor, I'll give you an A+

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 09 May 2010

Rain as a metaphor for love is refeshing.rain is continuuos.Emotions is part of the whole of love and can't be a part except by one's own experince.Sheldon, a refrehing write

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Eyan Desir 01 May 2010

heavy came the rain If there is love there is also pain good write

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