Monday, February 5, 2007
The Rain Comments
Rating: ★5.0
The rain falls gently now
The drought is at its peak
The land is so dry
Even here
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Brian Dorn
11 February 2007
Snatching moments of creativity is what poetry is all about. You did that quite well with this piece... good write, Sandy! Brian
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7/29/2025 10:32:43 AM # 1.0.0
Sandy, I love the way you begin the poem as a descriptive piece about rain after drought and then shift the focus to politics and finally personal expression - 'broken down people in a broken down world' is superb. Another fine poem. love, Allie xxxx