Thursday, August 13, 2020

The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's the dripping clouds
From silver eyes of faint sky
To ease the tears flow
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Mac Che 21 January 2021

fantbulous short write; nice

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Varsha M 28 December 2020

Hiding tears in the cosier disguise of rain this us beautiful.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 August 2020

dripping clouds, silver eyes easing the glow of the tears, you are becoming a master of poetic excellence dear Mahtab. tony

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2020

Loveliest Haiku, Mahtab. In full excellence and brilliance. The words are one by one pearls! A 10++++ Thank you for sharing this loveliest Haiku!

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 August 2020

Chain and pain! ! Rain and drain! Able to overcome the odds. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 August 2020

silver eyes of faint sky... lovely... yes, sometimes rain seems to shed tears on mankind seeing it in such a mess.

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Tom Allport 15 August 2020

A write that flows from most high...well penned

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 August 2020

A wonderfully crafted poem. Truly impressive....10+++

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M Asim Nehal 14 August 2020

Wonderful, From silver eyes of faint sky - this line made all the difference.100++

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Anjandev Roy 14 August 2020

To ease the tears flow.......lovely.....thank u, dear friend.....anjandev roy.

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Muhammad Ali 14 August 2020

Beautiful piece of art.. Rain to ease the path of pain.

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me poet yeps poet 13 August 2020

Dripping FRom MY PEN YOU KNOW TO MAKE SOMEONE PREGNANT R⁰ TO EASE MY BURDEN OF LOVE...why Not Reading my poems SurrrrRr MB OF BD Site giving trouble no comment coming or gooing.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 13 August 2020

A lovely portrayal of rainfall. Great imagery.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 August 2020

A wonderfully crafted piece. Simply amazing...10++

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Aarzoo Mehek 13 August 2020

Let the cloud release the burst of pain. Beautiful imagination. Loved it.10++

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