Thursday, October 12, 2017

The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here I am
Bleating for the rain to rain
I couldn't just stand there
While animals suffer
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Tefo Mahlotle Mello
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Jazib Kamalvi 22 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Tefo M. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Tefo Mahlotle Mello 22 November 2017

Thanks, I am looking forward to read your collection

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

While animals suffered there was none left in the river, no little water. You were waiting fir rain as it is today. The rain that will end up all our worries will definitely to give water. Rain of grace of God will wash away sins. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.10

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Tefo Mahlotle Mello 12 October 2017

Glad you like it and I am also glad that it took you to an imaginary world where you've managed to extend it Kumarmani

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 October 2017

Such an inspiring poem, Tefo.... a huge 10++++

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Tefo Mahlotle Mello 12 October 2017

Thanks Bernard. Glad you liked it. You can find some of my poet at google books.

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