Wednesday, September 20, 2017

The Rain Comments

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THE RAIN

Rain is falling pitter patter,
Oh! I forgot to close the shutter;
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Khirod Dalpati
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 October 2017

You do well to involve your entire family in pitter patter but if it's summer rain all enjoy it mostly how does it matter as long as it falls pitter patter and if it's winter my get inside your razai/(quilt) let others look after themselves you look after your mom and pop old no! Kindness poets are poets only what is there in a name enjoy poetry and comment please I have selected a minuscule few you feel happy to be one Sir. Yes I am a ROMANTIC POET mostly Glad you liked my poetry Thank you

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Khirod Dalpati 01 October 2017

Thank you Romantic Poet For your comments. Keep reading and commenting on my poems...... 10+++++++ for your poems

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Gajanan Mishra 20 September 2017

rain is falling pittar pittar, beautiful

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Khirod Dalpati 20 September 2017

Thank you for your comments Sir. That was a child's wish

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