Tuesday, September 29, 2015

The Rain Comments

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The dry and arid ambience
Had become husky,
Sweaty and irksome!
Herbs, blades of grass
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Vidya Pandarinath
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Rajnish Manga 19 October 2015

This appears to me as the moment of Pralay or the doomsday on earth but....'moistened their lips With bottled water' makes it somewhat unpalatable. However, I love the flow of the poem. Thanks.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 30 September 2015

Verily, extremes are great dangers to the earthly,

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