Thursday, October 4, 2012

The Rain Comments

Rating: 4.5

Outside the window, the rain falls down
Heavy and weighted like a broken ship.
I feel like a king without his crown,
And melancholy seeps from my lip.
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Matthew Peel
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Amanda Laurent 21 October 2012

I love the first four lines! This poem has beautiful imagery and raw emotion.

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