Monday, June 4, 2012

The Rain Comments

Rating: 2.1

The rain came today
what it brought
was monumental,
it has touched the soil, dry and cracked before; No more.
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Kasia Fedyk
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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 09 June 2012

Let it rain, let life blaze. Witty metaphors. I love it.

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Indira Babbellapati 09 June 2012

yes...rain refreshing, rejuvenating and resurrecting!

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Valerie Dohren 06 June 2012

Beautiful, very descriptive - you may like to read mine entitled After The Rain.

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Sharad Juneja 05 June 2012

Very refreshing and rejuvenating

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that is good and it gives a courage like it

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Nontobeko Dlamini 05 June 2012

A beautiful appreciation of rain. The personification of the soil create this vivid image of joy and happiness.

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