The Railway (Verse) Comments

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Outstanding one, thank you poet for this great poem

Again modern horrible and terrible pictures are depicted by these lines, ......... I have walked for long and long, faced long quarry only iron and stone all through the journey no pearls, diamond or ivory, i have heard fierce, painful crying but seen no tiger or lion roaring

This poem is a strong criticism of the modern world, .. I have seen cutting, burning, clearing forests filling lakes, dishes, rivers, leveling hills, killing wilds for paving the paths of iron and stone, for ever growing silver civilization

Excellent commentary on the modern jungle. I especially liked the alliteration and parallels in the following two lines: for paving the paths of iron and stone, for ever growing silver civilization Well don, sir.

A great modern verse, let me quote from your poem, ....... I have walked for long and long, faced long quarry only iron and stone all through the journey no pearls, diamond or ivory, i have heard fierce, painful crying but seen no tiger or lion roaring absurd history makers they are; So outstanding and appropriate of being great modern verse, thanks dear poet

It’s a great poem! Wonderful poetic expression carrying substantial details behind “The Railway”: “I have seen cutting, burning, clearing forests filling lakes, dishes, rivers, leveling hills, killing wilds”….Then, “…modern civilization exists mills, factories, industries”. In final stanza you have expressed your deep concern: “I have seen cutting, burning, clearing forests/filling lakes, dishes, rivers..” Absolutely brilliant! Thanks for sharing

Great verse on railway, a great modern great poem, thank you poet

Wow! it is a great modern verse for railway which has doth sides of merits and demerits, outstanding, thanks

This poem is an epic in style, wonderfully penned

I have walked for long and long, faced long quarry only iron and stone all through the journey no pearls, diamond or ivory, i have heard fierce, painful crying but seen no tiger or lion roaring absurd history makers they are; this is the touching verse, great done dear poet

Rail way normally we see. But how it is. It's history here greatly described in this poem, great done, poet, congrats. I love this poem very much, thanks,10

The Railway a great modern verse and a wonderful poem 10

The Railway a great modern poem, thanks for share, + 10 is my vote

This poem is an extraordinary modern verse describe modernity well,10

I have walked for long and long, faced long quarry only iron and stone all through the journey no pearls, diamond or ivory, i have heard fierce, painful crying but seen no tiger or lion roaring absurd history makers they are; it is great write. Your every poem I see successful one 10

A successful modern verse on the phases of modernity fully with a great nostalgic part. Dear poet, you have shared here a great poem like The Railway. The more I read this poem the more my interests increase, thanks

It is an excellent poem shows how railways are being establishing, great Vertically they have gone to see the horizon dividing into two parallel paths of iron and stone nor to return or to encounter sometimes, only crease cross to pass trains and trams with passengers and goods ever absurd they are;

Communications have been developed but morality has been damned Here and there wide and long hollow down bridges over ponds, lakes, channels, rivers even seas where ply boats, launches all the times, sometimes through long tunnel goes through hills, desert and channel challenging explorers they are;

Poet here has made an unlimited journey and seen modern earth's destruction, unrestness in human society I have walked for long and long, faced long quarry only iron and stone all through the journey no pearls, diamond or ivory, i have heard fierce, painful crying but seen no tiger or lion roaring absurd history makers they are;