Sunday, August 31, 2008

The Railroad Ride To Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

My model railroad stretched about
Through every room and floor.
I strived to make the whole layout
Look better than before.
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Jean Mallette
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David Threadgold 06 October 2008

Hi Jean. Wonderfully penned and put together. and from an ex railwayman I know how difficult it is sometimes to stay on track. you have managed it right to the end. very well done and a pleasant read. well worthy of a 10/10/10. Regards Dave T

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Nathaniel Booker 01 September 2008

'He will wipe out every tear from their eyes, and death will be no more... Neither will mourning, nor outcry, nor pain be anymore... The former things have passed away' (Rev.21: 3-5) I can't think of anything else more appropriate, so I let what was written under Divine Inspiration say it all. Be Well, Nate

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Keith Foley 01 September 2008

I give this one a 15 out 10. Loved it sooo much. Transends above the lay poets like myself. If I could follow my heart as you have, one day maybe, I can write such an enjoyable piece. Thanks, Keith

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Ellie Sutton 31 August 2008

Amen :) I found this really uplifting, keep writing!

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Kris Smith 31 August 2008

A true and virtous write but don't lose sight that other friends care for you as well 10 Chris

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Jean Mallette

Jean Mallette

Mobile, Alabama
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