Friday, March 30, 2012

The Rage(My Love) Comments

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Rage's in my eyes for those
who Use rather abuse my powers
i shall Bash that person
i shall not Yeald mercy
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Jayson Shakya
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Jennifer Chalk 30 March 2012

I agree with the line - doing one thing over and over and not being vexed from it is.. madness. For example - I hate repeating myself - broken record broken record broken record broken record broken record broken record broken record broken record - SMASH! POW! - There fixed it - good poem!

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