Monday, September 10, 2012

The Races Comments

Rating: 4.2

I've won a day at the races
For me and my friend Pat Maguire
Posh frocks and new hats
That's what we require.
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Hazel Connelly
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Neela Nath Das 11 September 2012

The art of narration is superb. I was seeing the entire scene vividly while reading this poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Dave Walker 11 September 2012

A wonderful poem with a great story to it.

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Leslie Philibert 11 September 2012

This is really great, funny and well written, a fine poem

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