Monday, February 25, 2019

The Race Track Of Time Comments

Rating: 4.5

There is no point running backwards
retracing stolen footprints
in anticlockwise course
time cant reverse force
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Kevin Patrick
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Rebecca Navarre 26 March 2025

Very deserving for poem of the day! .. Congratulations! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 26 March 2025

A Beautifully heart moving poem, with a powerful message! ..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 December 2023

I put the focus on your very first line, 'There is no point running backwards'. A poem that goes beyond all praise!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2022

An insightful piece.. my great pleasure reading this impactful poem multiple times! !

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Richard Wlodarski 19 May 2022

My horse is running as fast as it can. And it will finish 1st with the publications of The Kerouac Project!

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Indira Renganathan 04 March 2022

Very inspiring write

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 January 2022

This wonderful poem has a great future! I wish you a happy and prosperous new year 2022

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2021

Inadvertent typos: please read as: the poet opens (part 1) ; the poet points out (part 2)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2021

In a nutshell, this little poem is a piece of sparkling diamond. I appreciate the theme, the flow and the simplicity of poetic expression which yields motivational impact on minds of readers. This timeless composition is worthy of profuse admirations. Top score!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2021

The poet ends up with motivational words, "race at your pace so you enjoy the finish line". The expression needs due attention that one can enjoy reaching the finish line if s/he proceeds at his/her own pace. (Part 4) .

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2021

The readers would unanimously appreciate what has been expressed in the next few words, "once the starting gun is set its the future that is met". Then comes Longfellow's advice that don't dwell on the past, don't believe on unseen future, act, thou act on the living present (Part 3)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2021

Then, the poets points out the pitfalls of anticlockwise course which drags one down. The poet has rightly set the poem in precision (part 2)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2021

The poets open with the line, "there is no point running backwards'. This very candid expression can be very much generalized as we all keep on marching in exploration of something new….Part 1

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Nabakishore Dash 24 November 2021

An extremely good write.Very exact instruction through your pen to proceed forward in ones life.Worthy of being visited many times Top marks respected poet.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 September 2021

A wonderful Poem Kevin! A revisit to read your poem!

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me poet yeps poet 05 May 2021

leave the past behind while you have this time AND COVID IS STILL KIND ADD ON KEVIN IT'S HIGH TIME MAY I REMIND

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Susan Williams 22 November 2020

Another great poem I have been privileged to read today! ! There is no point running backwards retracing stolen footprints / in anticlockwise course _+++++ - -This is so perfectly put! ! ! And so is the rest of this intelligent poem. Top top marks! Onto my fav list! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 November 2020

A great motivational piece of work in its absolute brevity! My pleasure revisiting this marvelous poem of yours!

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A wonderful poem Kevin, that has motivated, inspired and rejuvenated me. To quote: " There is no point running backwards retracing stolen footprints in anticlockwise course time cant reverse force" The truth of life so beautifully penned.......10 Thank you dear Poet.

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 March 2020

race at your pace so you enjoy the finish line.. Yes, beautiful take-outs of the poem so well writ. Congrats for POD

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