The Race Ii Comments

I will look forward to the conclusion and resrve my comments Roger ivor

There are so many things that we race for in real life: success in our jobs, the affection and love of someone. We compete for pretty much everything with anyone and everyone - when in reality: we only have to compete with is time. Time to do everything in such a short while.....I love your poem, Roger. It is what goes through in our hearts and minds, figuratively speaking.....It captures the spirit of the 'race'.

you get your message across clearly Perseverance is required to succeed at anything You have a regular rhyme scheme but pay little attention to meter is this beacuse you prefer free form ot just as it came Ivor

you have a very nice poem.... i like it.... i will keep it in my heart... thank you thank you..... God bless a 10 point