Saturday, July 11, 2020

The Race! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Go! The race is on!
Down they plummet.
From their start-point.
Atop a mountain summit.
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Shaun Cronick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 July 2020

The superb imagery of this marvelous write made me a witness of a one of a kind competition. Vividly conveyed with precise words that describe the race. Another excellent write, Shaun. So wonderfully written. Onto my Poem List.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 July 2020

In the race of friendship Though there has competition But has winner....in the race of Poetic wisdom though there has Points for reader but certainly can't Fix the wise.........

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Dominic Windram 11 July 2020

Great poem that beautifully captures the pace of a race and a fine way to end...it's a twisting, turning 10 from me!

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