Wednesday, May 10, 2023

The Quiet Water Comments

Rating: 4.1

The day was warm and bright
The sky and the horizon
Were brilliant blue
I took my two dogs
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Anjandev Roy 21 September 2023

Such an amazing piece....love to read it time and again...

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.."… pastures and meadows Covered with wildflowers …." Picturesque…

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The deceitful life…

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Indira Renganathan 03 June 2023

Enjoyable nature taking the readers to a shocking end...a well written poem

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Enjoyed reading again again. Such deep insight into mundane things

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" I saw a snake shaped river Flowing through the middle " picturesque……

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Brilliant! What more to say?

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Impeccable poetry indeed, as Anjandev rightly observed

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Isited again. Loved reading once again

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Rebecca Navarre 29 May 2023

So Heart movingly written! ..

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Feels really good to this poem ranking #16. Fantastic. Congratulations

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Your poem definitely reminds the danger of following shadows that are the hides of devils. Excellently presented

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Made a re. Enjoyed. " The quiet water Is masked with Peacefulness ….. Yet it is deceitful " lovely

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 21 May 2023

Your beautifully composed, stirring poem captivated me, from the joyous beginning, until the sad end

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 May 2023

but this sublimest poem reminds all of us on poem Hunter how brave and a pets-lover you are, dear great Poetess! TOP Marks for this most deserving on Best Members Poem List Top 100. AND To My Fvourites

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 May 2023

but you are the true pets lover, you protect them and tried to safe, but to no avail, such a greatest pity, as a pets lover you are mourning still,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 May 2023

Congratulations, dear Rose Marie, you can and dare to swim to save the cute lovely pets, but I cannot and dare never to swim in open waters, I can only play and splash in the swimming pool,

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At #19 today. Congratulations

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David Wood 17 May 2023

You are at #18 on the best member poems list. It's so lovely to see so many of my poet friends there too. It seems our poems strike a chord with readers

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 May 2023

This great poem is at #65 position. Very soon it will occupy #2 position ranking after Unni ji ' poem...congrats

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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