into the mist I traveled
losing myself in reverie
coming upon my soul I thought lost
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A beautifully envisioned poem with the base of spirituality reflecting struggle of the soul to attain salvation. Thanks for sharing.
Has a soothing oriental touch, of sandal rose and flowing veils that gently touch. After dangerous darkness comes the light, dissipating fright, making things right. The whole composition is beautifully conceived, superb imagery open the way to an optimistic, well ending conclusion. Very nice!
thank you graciously Sandra you made me smile today :)