Saturday, September 3, 2016

~the Quiet Voice~ Comments

Rating: 4.0

into the mist I traveled
losing myself in reverie
coming upon my soul I thought lost
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Sandra Feldman 05 September 2016

Has a soothing oriental touch, of sandal rose and flowing veils that gently touch. After dangerous darkness comes the light, dissipating fright, making things right. The whole composition is beautifully conceived, superb imagery open the way to an optimistic, well ending conclusion. Very nice!

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Brenda Jensen 06 September 2016

thank you graciously Sandra you made me smile today :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

Caressing my soul! Nice work.

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Brenda Jensen 06 September 2016

thank you for such a kind comment

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Kelly Kurt 03 September 2016

A nicely penned piece, Lilly. Thanks

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Brenda Jensen 04 September 2016

thank you most kindly Kelly..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 September 2016

A beautifully envisioned poem with the base of spirituality reflecting struggle of the soul to attain salvation. Thanks for sharing.

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Brenda Jensen 04 September 2016

thank you most graciously Ratnakar

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