Sunday, October 6, 2013

The Quest Started Since Comments

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The first morn’s yellow flames pulsated
Over the sliver sky’s infinite flank.
Adam, the blessed father of mankind,
Opened his wheat-toned eye lids;
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Tajudeen Shah
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Heather Wilkins 09 October 2013

a good write Enjoyed the read

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Valsa George 07 October 2013

Satan grew jealous of the honour and glory given to man and against God's command he showed his unwillingness to prostrate before him! However Satan's malice spilled over and finally succeeded in tempting man to disobey God and thereby depriving him of his bliss. Man's search and his quest after the lost bliss has thus begun from the beginning of creation and goes on relentless! Beautiful description of Adam coming into wakefulness and beholding the splendour of everything created for him! Great write, Tajudeen!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 06 October 2013

Agreed but satan is always a peripheral element rount the truth (Prophet and angel and saint) Adam AS was the first victim through Mother Hawwa still tortures us we have Book still we are recede ding towards fire...I say bhai Why there is hitch Duniya ba raahe deen Deen siratul mustaQeem

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Gajanan Mishra 06 October 2013

good poem, I like it. thanks.

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