The Quest For Eden Comments

I love this uplifting write with great rhythm and flow, very inspired write!

Really lovely poem with a new twist. I still can give new twist: Satan came a technology park His new wares to sell Perhaps he was cloth merchant Eve to him victim fell

Though I am not religious my inspiration was the story of Adam and eve being banished from the garden of eden and trying to relate the story to the struggles of life but being able to overcome those struggles Thank you for asking

I really loved this. What was your inspiration?

I enjoyed your poem, Liam. Thanks for posting