Saturday, February 28, 2009

The Quest Comments

Rating: 5.0

tiny shiny diamonds
suspended in the night
over these mystery paths
humming echoes of tribal chants
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Lee Crowell
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Sadiqullah Khan 13 March 2009

How far the will can go, but great piece,10

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Vaibhav Pandey 12 March 2009

Great piece of work sir....you forced me to think with this poem...10

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Bonnie Collins 08 March 2009

This is very powrefully written with much depth, and mind provoking.. I will tell you after carefully reading it twice, what I felt from this, it seemed to take my mind back to places, roads, avenues inwhich I have persoanlly traveled, mostly with memory, and some of them, were fullfilling others not, and I wondered if this is what your write had intended to say, if not, I feel it trully is a well written piece with alot of depth that leads the reader to THIINK.... I enjoyed this.. Bonnie

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Dr Kamran Haider 06 March 2009

It was little difficult for me to grasp what you really want to say in this beautifully composed piece. Technically its near to best yet I would have loved it more if it would have little bit more vivid. Having said that it's your piece Sir, and you have full right to make it open or conceal it in beautiful wrapper. My humble mind needs more insight and skill to read the story behind these wonderful words. Thanks for sharing Regards, Kamran

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Trudy FlashGordon 03 March 2009

short sweet and to the point i like it

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Elbert Matt Loubser 03 March 2009

very vague, but a nice poem. It may have moved me if it wasn't left to me to create the message myself

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Winnie Angel 02 March 2009

a thematic one have loved to read! ! !

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Deependra Kumar Jha 02 March 2009

awesome! a thought provoking poem. thanks for sharing

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Joseph Poewhit 02 March 2009

'Tribal chants', brought a feeling of peoples values.

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Kizza Michael 01 March 2009

we live ours lives in blindness and that is what is its all about..........beautiful thought...

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 01 March 2009

Beautifully written. keep it up.

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Costa Anakiev 01 March 2009

beautifully written. you're very romantic, seeing what other people can't notice.

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Darkness J 01 March 2009

Very nice chosen words, I really like it.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 01 March 2009

deep thought, cosmic and beautiful thanks for sharing

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Joya Feghaly 01 March 2009

lovely poem... touching words...! ! ! keep on writing...

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Jihad T 01 March 2009

good reflection of your imagination with hidden meanings behide these words

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Denis Martindale 01 March 2009

I was requested to read the poem called 'THE QUEST'... Upon reading this poetry, I felt that I should write a poem, too. It's also called 'THE QUEST', if anyone would care to use the poemhunter Searcher to read it...

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Lalitha iyer 01 March 2009

Dear Sir, before I could read ur art or say heart it is over. sorry......I am not moved.

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Chelsi Ruffing 01 March 2009

Wow that was inspireing.

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Lyric, evocative, intimate touches, half symbolist half romantic. Absolutely you should read 'Nocturnal Song by an Errant Shepherd of Asia' by Giacomo Leopardi, I wonder whether an English translation may exist.

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