tiny shiny diamonds
suspended in the night
over these mystery paths
humming echoes of tribal chants
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Great piece of work sir....you forced me to think with this poem...10
This is very powrefully written with much depth, and mind provoking.. I will tell you after carefully reading it twice, what I felt from this, it seemed to take my mind back to places, roads, avenues inwhich I have persoanlly traveled, mostly with memory, and some of them, were fullfilling others not, and I wondered if this is what your write had intended to say, if not, I feel it trully is a well written piece with alot of depth that leads the reader to THIINK.... I enjoyed this.. Bonnie
It was little difficult for me to grasp what you really want to say in this beautifully composed piece. Technically its near to best yet I would have loved it more if it would have little bit more vivid. Having said that it's your piece Sir, and you have full right to make it open or conceal it in beautiful wrapper. My humble mind needs more insight and skill to read the story behind these wonderful words. Thanks for sharing Regards, Kamran
very vague, but a nice poem. It may have moved me if it wasn't left to me to create the message myself
we live ours lives in blindness and that is what is its all about..........beautiful thought...
beautifully written. you're very romantic, seeing what other people can't notice.
good reflection of your imagination with hidden meanings behide these words
I was requested to read the poem called 'THE QUEST'... Upon reading this poetry, I felt that I should write a poem, too. It's also called 'THE QUEST', if anyone would care to use the poemhunter Searcher to read it...
Dear Sir, before I could read ur art or say heart it is over. sorry......I am not moved.
Lyric, evocative, intimate touches, half symbolist half romantic. Absolutely you should read 'Nocturnal Song by an Errant Shepherd of Asia' by Giacomo Leopardi, I wonder whether an English translation may exist.
How far the will can go, but great piece,10