Friday, May 7, 2010

..The Quest..1. Comments

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the beauty was so perfect...
that it felt...almost cruel,
i could feel the pain in my bosom...
the pain of its perfection.
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Sadiqullah Khan 21 May 2010

The main part of this poem is swathed with beauty and the pain is worn by patience, this i slife itself. The end, there is giving up to the eternity, in soulful solace. I like the upper part.10

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