Mighty oceans of darkness
slowly flow
Shiny pearls like stars
brightly glow
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Ahh, The Queen of the Night, you have painted from the palate of your heart Each brush stroke 'tis so capturing and eloquent - right from the start! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad
This is a wonderful and very creative job of both rhythm and rhyming of verses. It creates a beautiful painted picture. I just adore the vision painted, GW62
You have artfully personified the magic and mystery of the night as an alluring and enchanting queen to whom all lovers of the night bow with alacrity.
An excellent piece of writing, so beautifully expressed the Queen of the Night, thanks, Lynda xxx
The way Georgia O'Keefe paints, you write. A bloom is infused with sensual life. You paint a poem of nature, and the reader hears deliciously more. This is an amazing poem! Very well done.
A brilliant poem elegant and capturing, a delight to read indeed! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad
here the poet takes the readers also along with him to feel those wonderful sensations... a good write celebrating a rare beauty of nature...
Fantastic and Who doesn't like the queens specially in nights?
An exquisite tribute to a rare and beautiful flower. You are a fine wordsmith. Warmest regards, Sandra
I enjoyed this so much I read it twice and the second time was nicer than the first.. I like the way you incorpated nature in the Stillness of the night thyme... Very touching and warm to read..... Bonnie
A magical, mystical read inspired by nature at her brightest and most ethereal. Your love of words is a joy to witness. A gracious poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
The queen of night.....blooming once ina blue moon......lovely to read......nice imaqgery
'Seducing enigmatic fragrances of absolute devine Mesmerizing sweet senses of mother nature's desig' I like it poems, gentle and sincere... Tsira
Sensation of your elegant bloom Appears once in a blue moon the poem is full of beautiful lines with exotic imagery...liked reading it.
Perfectly penned! ! Flow is soft and the words just roll off the tongue..nothing forced here.. A vision of pure poetry..the second last stanza is incredible.. My admiration and '10' Thanks for the read