Monday, April 28, 2008

The Queen Of The Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mighty oceans of darkness
slowly flow
Shiny pearls like stars
brightly glow
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Hemakumar Nanayakkara
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Wendy Bureau 25 August 2008

Perfectly penned! ! Flow is soft and the words just roll off the tongue..nothing forced here.. A vision of pure poetry..the second last stanza is incredible.. My admiration and '10' Thanks for the read

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Thad Wilk 17 August 2008

Ahh, The Queen of the Night, you have painted from the palate of your heart Each brush stroke 'tis so capturing and eloquent - right from the start! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Greenwolfe 1962 04 August 2008

This is a wonderful and very creative job of both rhythm and rhyming of verses. It creates a beautiful painted picture. I just adore the vision painted, GW62

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Chitra - 14 July 2008

This is a very good poem with great rhythm and rhyme

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Robert Howard 25 May 2008

You have artfully personified the magic and mystery of the night as an alluring and enchanting queen to whom all lovers of the night bow with alacrity.

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Lynda Robson 07 May 2008

An excellent piece of writing, so beautifully expressed the Queen of the Night, thanks, Lynda xxx

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Tammy Von Payens 06 May 2008

The way Georgia O'Keefe paints, you write. A bloom is infused with sensual life. You paint a poem of nature, and the reader hears deliciously more. This is an amazing poem! Very well done.

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Thad Wilk 04 May 2008

A brilliant poem elegant and capturing, a delight to read indeed! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Kesav Easwaran 04 May 2008

here the poet takes the readers also along with him to feel those wonderful sensations... a good write celebrating a rare beauty of nature...

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Nimal Dunuhinga 01 May 2008

Fantastic and Who doesn't like the queens specially in nights?

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Sandra Fowler 30 April 2008

An exquisite tribute to a rare and beautiful flower. You are a fine wordsmith. Warmest regards, Sandra

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 29 April 2008

so beautiful....thanks for sharing

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Bonnie Collins 29 April 2008

I enjoyed this so much I read it twice and the second time was nicer than the first.. I like the way you incorpated nature in the Stillness of the night thyme... Very touching and warm to read..... Bonnie

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Alison Cassidy 29 April 2008

A magical, mystical read inspired by nature at her brightest and most ethereal. Your love of words is a joy to witness. A gracious poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Malini Kadir 29 April 2008

The queen of night.....blooming once ina blue moon......lovely to read......nice imaqgery

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Tsira Goge 28 April 2008

'Seducing enigmatic fragrances of absolute devine Mesmerizing sweet senses of mother nature's desig' I like it poems, gentle and sincere... Tsira

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Abha Sharma 28 April 2008

Sensation of your elegant bloom Appears once in a blue moon the poem is full of beautiful lines with exotic imagery...liked reading it.

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Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Colombo / Sri Lanka
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