- The Queen - Comments

Too many lives have been taken by the queen it is time to dethrone and behead her and her sellers. This is a very rich poem. Keep going your work is very toouching. Thanks, Tracker

I must agree with Ann, life should not be taken for granted. I also like how you really couldn't predict the poem.

Well written. The course of our times, I wish young people would overdose on life instead, it is far more rewarding, and what you see is real.