Monday, December 5, 2005

The Python Comments

Rating: 5.0

When a new woman enters my life,
the time comes to introduce her
to the python of personal history
that I keep around as a pet.
...
Read full text

Max Reif
COMMENTS
John Kay 05 December 2005

Max...I love this one. I found myself chuckling in the first stanza and thought the metaphor was probably over, then it went on to continue to surprise.

0 0 Reply
John Tiong Chunghoo 05 December 2005

dear reif, if you could explain the last two lines to me.

0 0 Reply
Raynette Eitel 05 December 2005

Very interesting metaphor, Max. This is well done. Raynette

0 0 Reply
Max Reif

Max Reif

OVER 400 POEMS SERVED! !
Close
Error Success