The Puzzle Comments

This is truly a great poem. I love the first line it really hit home with me a true sentiment on life.

great poem, you have a great sense of rhythm and rhyme :)

TJ thank you for your kind comments. I've read all your poems and you have a great feeling for pace and rythm, and a talent for writing. you've felt the hurt, you've written the words, now let it go. you're too good a writer to stay with this subject, write about a tree on a hill, a cup of coffee, a dog, chase the images, go where it takes you, enjoy the act of writing and express your happiness in what you find. ps your well out of it.

Amazing poem Tj, hope is all we have got in our lives, when things go astray. Thanks.

Thats better light appears into your work Chris 10

Now that's enough to put a smile on anyone's face 10/10