Friday, May 9, 2014

The Puzzle Comments

Rating: 4.4

Many roads lead to our chance, for a better future,
To savour the golden moments,
Memories that will linger,
Like the beauty of the words, sung by a singer,
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Hazel Durham
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Geetha Jayakumar 02 November 2014

Quite an Inspiring poem Hazel. Especially the last lines says it all..... Like a bird trying to fly with one fluttering wing, We discover suddenly to our surprise, that we can sing! Very true said, life is indeed a puzzle and we should not get drown into it. There is always a way out, if the bird can flutter with one wing, then why not we solve the puzzle and come out. Life often surprises us. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Loaded with love that is laudable my friend!

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Hans Vr 24 May 2014

Strong message in melodious verses. love

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Dinesan Madathil 14 May 2014

Every puzzle confounds us for a while and the solution in offing consoles us next. A powerful poem, Hazel.

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Dave Walker 12 May 2014

A great poem, the path we take keeps us busy for a lifetime. If it's the right path, we may never know.

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Valerie Dohren 11 May 2014

Packed full of inspiration, a lovely poem with a great message.

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Ramesh Rai 10 May 2014

Puzzle of life can eaisily b resolved.. Life flows naturally we need not to b trapped. Make the life easier.

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Lyn Paul 09 May 2014

The puzzle of life is so easy to solve I stand with you with this. Inspiring words that are so beautifully written.

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Valsa George 09 May 2014

When hearts are filled with love, we find that we can sing... The puzzle of life is easier to solve with love.. and love survives even the roar of the ocean and drowns all our cares and vexations...! Hazel, I enjoyed this beautiful write!

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