The Purple Ant Comments

I was drawn in by the wonderful title. You provide a great reminder of the virtues of ants, working so hard, and overcoming obstacles far greater than they are. We can all learn from a purple ant.

a beautiful poem Bhargabi, you have a style with words that is beyond compare :)

This poem has a musical 'ding dong bell' effect! Yes, ants are so hard working and we can learn many valuable lessons from them! Enjoyed this sweetly rhyming poem!

This poem gave me a break from the reading of the usual submissions. The poetic devices applied have worked magically and in terms of quality writing with a pedagogic flavour you have done a marvellous job here madam Mahakul. Here is a 10 awarded for you...

Love the title and loved the whole poem. In Nature's creation these little ants have so much to teach us.

i like how you managed to get teach/each both at the ends of lines. nice rhyming throughout. your poem has a kind of singsong feel to it which i enjoyed. i may not understand all of it, like the thumb part, but i like it. thanks for sharing. bri :)

We human beings have a lot to learn from this tiny soul God has made but with a huge mind suffused with wisdom, discipline and generosity...........a well composed poem with insights

A nice dedication to the people of world, a lovely message to work hard, inspiring description of purple ant.

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

Well measured rhymed poem while reading singin' I wrote recently Flowery Bowery.., and the rising sun and.. just read if you get time to read

beautiful poem...the rhyme and rhythm is also appreciable...the poem has a message too